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Waiting Forever

Look!
And you will see,
through the rain
by that tree
there is the man,
that stands in wait for his lover,
cold in the rain
he crys forever
drowning in his tears
dying of heartache
he stands forever
waiting for his lover
Like awilted rose that has lost
its fragrance,
Like a candle with no more incense,
He weeps like a child with no parent,
For he stands there, forever waiting
for his lover.
Never moving,
always waiting,
with a bullet in his head,
he weeps forever waiting for his lover
will she come?
will he ever go home?
no, he will never give up.
For he stands,
forever waiting for his lover
He will never give up never move on until at last,
he is in his lovers arms again.

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  • meganf
    September 19
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    omg...ii so love the poem
    *meg

  • This is a reflection on infatuation and self-indulgence. Powerfuly sorrowful.


  • Elavina
    February 29
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    So awsome

    and sad, this poem always reminds me of certian things (sweat drop) anyways its a good poem.


  • poetwomen
    February 12
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    Very good

    I love it.


  • Ammon Nyktos
    December 31, 2007
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    Omg, i love it so much *huggles tightly* love ya
  • freshbone
    December 26, 2007

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    pretty

    its a very rich poem. its a poem about love and loss and how someone will wait for eternity if only they could have the person they love more than anything in the world in their arms again. its a really good poem.
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