I spend all waking moments alone
drowning in a sea of desire.
Lost in my mind
with nothing but fantasy to bide my time.
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Unworthy, I feel
of a love so dear
that you would enter me for eternity.
~
Author notes
sexuality
A contest entry
- Sexuality by JustAnotherIdoit.
450 points, ended January 6, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Optionsss cos they is the best =] by Ilma.
875 points, ended January 11, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I like this one, it's short but it works well. I especially love the first 2 lines. It's a very subtle poem I think. Well done, best of luck and thanks for entering. Hannu xx
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That we can be in need & wish. Yet feel unworthy. seems only the vain could never understand. Write & I will read for trying to get readers on here is very hard. Unless it is erotic lol
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wow
I think this is some of your best stuff...it's few words that pack a punch of erotic tints...love it..thanx so much for sharing..best of luck in the contest..
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THank you so much, I have been trying to take your advise on puncuation, It really does make a stronger impact.
Merry christmas!
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wow interesting. thanks for the entry.
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In all honesty, i wish I more to write about.
Thanks for the contest! -
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no problem, and hey, thanks for the entry.
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