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Hollow snow

Hollow snow embraces,
cracks in the sidewalk.
Man leaves footprints...
His heart cold as midnight-snow,
causing the world to freeze...

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  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    January 1, 2008
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    interesting imagery.


  • MissStranger
    December 30, 2007

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    hmmmmm...I like your style very much!it's simply bursting with energy!well done again!keep it up!


  • Kia Tenshi
    December 24, 2007

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    Aw...so sad. I don't know why. It leaves you to think up thousands of different situations. Very nice!