When I do not meet you
or get your phone call.
I feel like the loneliest person
on the planet.
I am scared of loneliness
as the former prison inmate
is scared of the bars
who lived behind bars for ten years.
I am scared of loneliness
as the man behind the iron mask
was scared of the iron mask.
When I do not listen to
your romantic voice
Einstein’s theory
of relativity
works well.
Moments become
minutes.
Minutes become
hours.
Hours become
days.
Author notes
This poem is dedicated to my beautiful girlfriend who is happy with me.
A contest entry
- Just write for you by zochit2me.
800 points, ended January 3, 2008, 16 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Sabir...this is a wonderful poem, inspired by your girlfriend...sounds like love..
...Best of luck in the contest. Peace, rhonda
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oh......oh wow.this was....amazing.i don't really know what to say.The ending reminded me somewhat of edgar allen poe.The part "I am scared of loneliness
as the man behind the iron mask
was scared of the iron mask." made me feel all tingly and i started staring shocked that no one has ever thought of something like this.your girlfriend must be proud =]
-Athena
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