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With Every Step...


With every step I make,
I find my vision

a bit better.

At my first step,
there were stairs between
me and her,
almost about a hundred.

At my second step,
there were stairs between
me and her,
almost about a double.

Immaterial of how hard I try,
to reduce the distances,

they will grow larger
and more of them will be seen

with every step I make,
I find my vision

a bit better.

(
There is an endless chain-
my eyes with my steps learns
to see more stairs, but,
even the Sun will visit the seas.
)

Author notes

The bracket section is not the part of the poem, just adds a little more to it and is bit of a personal.

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