shall i laminate my mistakes?
turn them into kodak moments?
so i won't forget my humanity(humility?).
tormenting myself with visions
of being cruel and back stabbing.
a mere specter of trueness?
which is factually authentic
or fabricated in my mind?
proverbial Angel/devil
sitting upon my shoulders.
mere brush of breath
carry the words,
"to which piper will you dance?"
Author notes
I generally do not capitalize...it's a quirk... and i think i'll keep it...LOL
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A contest entry
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2700 points, ended January 5, 2008, 5 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Very thought provoking and original in context. I think I may be impressed.
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BRAVO! BRAVO! BRAVO!
oh..i love that...shall I lamainate my mistakes?
good one for one of my past bosses! loved it!
very cleverly written..my humanity (humility)
Well...well...now..I really enjoyed how smartly this
poet wove the poem together. I bet we can all read into
it from all our different perspectives.
Just and excellent job!
big fan of layered writing! you did EXCELLENT!
ears2hearyou
Kathleen : )) my fav.
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Loved it, loved it.
Ra, ra, ra. -
"to which piper will you dance?"
Love that line, nice job
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