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Mum

when you have a mother
who cares so much for you
that anything you want
becomes her desires to

when you have a mother
who is so understanding that
no matter what is bothering you
she can make you smile

when you have a mother
who is so strong that
no matter what obstactes she faces
she is always confident infront of you

when you have a mother
who actively persuces her goals
but includes you in all her goals

You are very lucky indeed
having a mother like this
makes it easy to grow up
into a loving / strong adult

Thankyou for being this kind of mother

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This is for my mum.

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  • Condemd RyeZing
    April 22, 2008
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    It's nice. I like the repitition. It gives a lot of meaning to the piece. Nice write.