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Garden of Eve

A crystalline apple

falls from snow white hands

into ivy and undergrowth.

 

A gift to Eve, brought

to her chapped lips,

knowledge parched tongues.

 

The beautiful snake.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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A contest entry

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  • nature mithya gold member
    August 10

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    The Beautiful Snake

    With a crystalline apple and no Adam.

    No Knowledge of the danger Eve missed in this write.
    lol

    Wonder where this diamond went.


  • Lj-
    December 27, 2007

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    Great imagery.
    I really like how you focused on the scene itself.

    Thank you for your entry,
    Best of luck.


  • Still Wondering
    December 24, 2007
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    What's a Verdict?

    From my friends: That was GENIOUS! okay, bye-bye.