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Please, Goodbye, and Thank You

oh my love please don't fear
no matter where you or I go
We're always near
please don't panic about my death
yet don't forget me  to soon
I'll always watch over you
like the sun and moon
let me heart be with you
let my thoughts be yours too
cause no matter what
I've always been true
I love you I mean it
and don't forget it
that you always have someone who cares
where ever your sorrow may get
Talk to me when you like
Heven or hell where ever my bed may lay
I'll love you tommorrow
even more then today
cry if you'd like
cause I'd cry too
if anything were to happen
and If I lost you
but may your sorrow not control you
my last request
because no matter what any one says
you are really to me the best
this is it
seven seconds left I love you so much
please don't forget me
please never my love
please and good bye
and thank you too

Author notes

good-bye my love though I may die my soul lives on if you carry it while I carry you

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  • BluesMan gold member
    January 15, 2008
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    Very Heart felt Good luck in my contest