A certain love affair with death,
Enables me to find you,
My next prey,
I wish to smother you,
With darkness and shadows,
Take in one breath,
For it is your last,
For sure,
My knife has a longing,
For the warmth of your blood,
The piercing of your skin,
My lullaby,
The scarlet drops of release,
Flow to my tongue,
Sweet release in you,
Sweet release in me,
My longing flows further than just mere killing you,
But draining you of everything,
Especially your blood,
Your red, thick blood,
My sweetness,
Your fate...
Author notes
Fallen Vampiress xx
A contest entry
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That was very interesting. I liked it ^_^ left me thinking.
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I love it!!
I loved it!!!!! I think you captured a vampire perfectly!! On the hunt I mean. Thank you for entering anf Good Luck!! -
It was like wow, I know what option you choose with out you telling me! good luck! also could you please put in your pen name?
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Interesting. I like it. Very well penned. Thanks for sharing such a interesting piece and keep it up.
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