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~~~~~~~~~But I H/8*t U~~~~~~~~
Author notes
I love the big blue
A contest entry
- Dirty Pretty Contest by Innocent Evil.
700 points, ended January 5, 2008, 35 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - DirtyPretty - Prewrites or Fresh by xxRainbowDawnxx.
450 points, ended July 30, 2008, 52 entries
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hmmm i know that one
being in love with someone, then them just running away again, when you get close
eh, gits. -
Nice
I think you may have tried a lil too hard with all the letters as number, but this is still Fantastic, i love
"(N/O/T/H/1/N/G L/£/F//T 2 S/@/Y
~~~~~~~~~But I H/8*t U~~~~~~~~
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[♥]Nicotine. -
humm not bad,, too much of /// this << but oh well good topic and mian idea. good job and its nice to try something new!!
good on you !
kaydee -
Nicely done
Powerful, emotional and looks great!
Stay safe
~Manda
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oh yes, I've felt this way before, but I'm trying to get rid of the feeling of hate, it's not very easy because I have plenty I would just like to mutilate, but I know anger isn't healthy in excession and it can only lead to my downfall, so what's the point. Love the symbols! x
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