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Cleansing Nights

 

Quietly in the shadows I hide,
waiting patiently, biding my time.
Lamplight softly reflects your beauty,
I've made my choice, you will be mine.

Silently following your steps, one by one,
waiting for the perfect place to pounce.
Knowing your screams will be many,
as I drain your blood ounce by ounce.

In anticipation I begin to tremble,
the blade shimmering in the light.
Swiftly grabbing your ebony hair,
your eyes grow wide with terror and fright.

You are all so damn predictable,
as a scream shatters the peace.
You really wouldn't do that,
if you knew it unleashed the beast.

With a single swipe across the face,
I give you a guillotine grin.
The blood turns your screams to gurgles,
as I pray to release your sin.

Eviscerating your lashed torso,
entrails slither like giant worms.
When will you ladies of the night,
ever bloody well learn?

The devil tells me to do this work,
to clean up each and every town.
Yes I know I'll be going to hell,
but I'll be wearing a crown.

Burning forever, eternal agony,
it does bring fear to most.
But when your mind works like mine,
the devil makes a very good host.


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Option 2. A Psychopath's/socio path's Mind

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  • Dak
    January 24, 2008

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    violating rules~ place your name somewhere [perferably authors notes] and message me the name of your poem when you do.


  • Synthetic-Nightmare
    December 27, 2007

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    WOW.....

    WHY THE FUCK HAVE I NOT COMMENTED THIS YET?
    aw hell, i'd totally have sex with my killer!! LOLOL

    yeah, that may have been a bit spastic..... (-
    and maybe a bit un-predictable?? LOL
    AMAZING WRITE! yay

    *hugs*

    kudos


  • PastelMoons gold member
    December 27, 2007

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    Pyschopaths mind?
    hmmmmm
    if they only knew

    Another fabulous write,
    from a great poet--
    no surprise there!
    Love this!
    ~Pastel


  • tysonthedog
    December 25, 2007

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    I always feel so much better after having read your contributions. This time I also enjoyed reading the kind comments of others too. How they feel that you have got into the mind flow of a psychopath is almost cute!!! You do write these with all the qualities shared by a schizophrenic genius. Brilliant Pink. Quite brilliant.
    Mark xx


  • TheClimb
    December 25, 2007

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    WOAH, you really got into a psychopath's mind didn't you? Your imagery was AMAZING and knocked me off my feet, wooooooooow!!!!


  • CherryOnTop
    December 25, 2007

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    There you go again. Now you have really captured the mind of a psychopath. Kinda eerie of you if you ask me.hahaha!!!Wonderfully written my friend and as always the penning and the imagery are superb.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    December 24, 2007

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    Yikes!! Very dark indeed... the mind of a psychopath is a scary thing and you've captured it well in this poem!! Gave me the shivers!!

    Great work!


  • Simply Lost
    December 24, 2007

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    Hmmmm, well written, an interesting take on the option! I love the imagery used, and how it links to what the person is thinking!

    Good Luck!

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