She sees
His plan in planets
and God reside in good
for sacred rhymes not with hatred
and decline not with divine
She knows
that it’s never far
from sigh to sight
from hole to whole
from no to now
and that
brooks of bliss
flow to those who are low
And while
joining u and i in union
she walks
the path of peace
All-One
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for nicolette with love http://allpoetry.com/Nicolette
inspired by Nicolette’s poem “from love’s mouth” http://allpoetry.com/poem/3689910
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Such a lovely tribute for Nicolette!
Your words are always so beautiful because they come from your heart but this image touched my heart immediately and made me smile...
"brooks of bliss
flow to those who are low"
I think even those words would make me smile if I was low
Maybe that's silly but it's true! 
ellie xx
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well, in a way, we can be low when we are feeling down, but also if we are humble ... in this manner, the brooks of bliss run to us effortlessly, because we are low like the valley and not high like the mountain ...
thank you so much for your comment and applause, little angel
marion
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"She knows
that it’s never far
from sigh to sight
from hole to whole
from no to now"
Sighhh...I'm quite her doves flew free upon reading such loving words from your pen, dear Marion. A grand tribute to my Sister of the Soul...& indeed, she makes me sigh quite often, as well. Brava, my Friend... Wanda/Vlindertjie
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Marion...oh wow! What a beautiful and tender poem this is, what a precious gift! I love what you did here and am honoured that my poem inspired this one - but most of all for the way you've personalised it and for understanding beyond the words...
I'll treasure this one, my friend...I am deeply touched. Thank you for sharing the light of your soul this way...beautiful!
~ Nicolette
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Beautiful and tender
This astounded me with word play, but it impresses more with the wit and wonder of this poet! You have done very well, Marion!
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her original poem is so much better than my playful little response ... I enjoyed very much writing this tribute, since it made me look at words in a different manner and discover the treasures contained within ...
thank you so much for having stopped by, my sweet sister,
merry christmas in kiev,
marion
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