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A few more steps...

Only a few steps to go

The top will be a reward

The gorgeous view will take your

breath away i promise it will

be all worthwhile

Just a couple more steps

we can make it

Life's like this stair case

we will be at the top

as long as we keep trying

we will sit and gaze

upon a beautiful

picture

just waiting to be discovered

lets go explore what has not been

seen

let us climb only a few more steps

then we will rest at the top of this

stunning tall mountain

to see the rivers that run below

and everyone will know

we made it up

 

a few more steps...

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  • ccfly
    December 25, 2007

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    This is such a beautiful poem! It made me so happy, it's nice to see an optimistic poem when all most of us write about is sadness, issues, loss etc. Amazing piece!


  • walkinthereign
    December 24, 2007
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    I love the background you chose!

    What a sweet optimistic poem! I like how you compared life to the staircase and how you used first person plural. In life we really need someone there with us to encourage us and help us along! Nice write! Keep writing and good luck in the contest!