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He made us late again!

He made us late again!







Catalina was trying to get dressed having just showered for a night out. Her boyfriend Jono had other ideas pinching her naked ass as she bent over to pick up a skirt. She slaps his hand away and says “please don’t, I promised Audrey we wouldn’t be late to have a birthday drink with her”.

With an angry glint in his eye, Jono acts quickly, grabs her and throws her a little too violently down on the bed. Why this switch on occasion goes off in Jono, no one knows.

She had only just managed to get her skirt on he relished in this and sunk his teeth down on her already erect nipple. He pushed them together against his hard cock and let their soft plumpness massage him. She resisted but knew there was no point. Her hands squeezed his legs and ass, she whimpered, “don’t tease just fuck me, I’m dripping for you right now”.

Even though he did as she begged and rammed himself into her warmth he still roughly pushed her down, in a cruel manner said “you didn’t even want me, so don’t tell me when I will fuck you”. His thrusts came hard and so fast Catalina could not keep up, she opened herself as wide as she could go as her muscles began to tighten against him, she wanted to feel every last bit.
In her pleasure, she cries out “you are my fucking animal”.

Jono impatiently flips her over and onto her knees, brings her towards him and starts the ride again. Cat screams out her orgasm as he squirts his sweet stuff all over her face and tits, but
Her cloud nine feeling is taken away in almost an instant when Jono walks out, no cuddle or kiss just “babe, get dressed we‘re late”.
She sighs as she gets up and thinks ‘fucking typical of him’....








The end



Author notes

I had to go with an erotic short story in the end, I couldn't get anything dark/gory out sorry lol . Hope you like it

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  • Timespell
    January 5, 2008

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    Well...

    I liked it and I liked the rawness of this piece.
    Ok... they both wanted the same thing, but the dominance factor came into play from Jono.

    You could easily expand this into a more Darker write.
    Maybe Jono was dropping Catalina off for shopping, but she decides to follow him and finds out he's having an affair with her best friend, thats why he was so eager to have quick one and get away...LOL

    O r am I just getting ready to Sharpen a nice knew Blade for the young Catalina..hehehe

    All the best,

    ~T.S~


    • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
      January 5, 2008

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      thanks T.S.
      I see to I could expand this and I hope to. Darker isn't something that comes naturally for me, but it is something I want to have aplay around with more


      Cindy


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    January 4, 2008

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    I think you did a great job with this one.
    It's interesting how lust seems to overcome
    some people like that. It's almost like they're
    not even thinking right, just letting their
    emotions take over. All of the wrong emotions
    that is. All the best to you with this one
    in the contest!




    Jeremy0826

    • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
      January 4, 2008
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      Spot on Jeremy, that was what I was going for with the feel of it, SO I am glad you got the general message of the piece


      Cindy


  • ExpectingMommy18
    December 24, 2007
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    although this wasn't dark and gory.the secret behind what jono is hiding could be.If you look a little deeper into the poem,jono has an anger problem and what he does with his spare time could very well be dark.This was great,you did a wonderful job with this peice here Cind.

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