I remember all the times,
we shared together.
I'm pleading inside,
begging you not to let go.
I'm wishing you'll keep,
the promise you made.
You said so many times,
I'll never lose you again.
Our memories are so,
intertwined.
I'm giving up,
I'm about to walk away.
I'm pleading inside,
don't let me go.
I don't want to leave,
I have to though.
It's hurting so much,
more to stay here.
Please make it,
bearable to stay.
All I need is you,
to say you care.
I need you to,
make me stay.
I don't want to,
leave but I have to.
Ask me to stay,
I'm begging you.
A contest entry
- Anything and everything by Fitz1901.
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Nicely written but so sad. Thank you for your entry. Patricia
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hm...I think nearly everyone can relate...good poem.
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Aww... good poem thanx 4 entering...
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the last stanza is excellent, it really brings the poem to a dramatic climax, i can't find anything wrong with this poem. excellent words
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This is a really awesome poem, I love the last stanza, it makes it so clear what your going through.
Thanks for entering -
great poem darling
keep up the work. -
I loved it
Aww...this is emotional,defiantly a poem people can relate to , when their relationship is near to over or 0on the rocks. WICKED x
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excellent
i have so much sympathy for you right now, i feel the same way you do. you did an excelent job, keep up the good work!!!!
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