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Unspoken

Imagining your breath--
soft,
sweltering,
upon my porous neck
as unspoken whispers
resound--

is to know the sound

of silence





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  • Malabu
    December 27, 2007

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    to read this is to raise the tempreture of anyones thoughts...linger of warm breath and hungry mouth...the ear hears subtle moans and desire is driven to explode...very beautiful this writing is...as most of those you write are...it's a winner in my eyes...
    Mal


  • Harrisham Minhas
    December 24, 2007
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    Beautiful and romantic.


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    December 24, 2007

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    Very creative and immensely beautiful. Thanks ever so much for sharing... x Love and light, ButterflySecrets.


  • catherinevania
    December 24, 2007
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    This is such a beautiful piece.
    It is as if you give the reader a glimpse into your heart.

    Wonderful portrayal of emotion.
    Excellent use of words.
    So sensual and so much passion in such a small piece.
    Regardless of the length, the passion can still be felt.
    Blessed be,
    Catherine


  • noiseandkisses
    December 24, 2007
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    wow this is pretty deep for its size.great emotions. i enjoy this, great write!
    -alana

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