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Tender Blossom



Tangled vines of fate
press loosely against this feathered silhouette

embracing the emptiness
which consumes realities sun

parched from hydraulic hope of
iridescent illusions
blending shadows of grey sadness
into moments of dark despair

one last bloom of an aged shell
waiting
patiently
to be pruned

defenseless beauty
admired;
stolen~
used

 

 

for dreams

 

 

 

 

 

 

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http://stefano83.deviantart.com/art/La-fioriera-72553347
La fioriera by *Stefano83

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  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    December 24, 2007

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    Wonderfully written and beautifully sad piece, sweetness
    This reaches out and touches the heart
    I wish you the very best in this contest!
    Love and hugs always,
    Sandy


  • PerfectImperfection
    December 24, 2007

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    Wonderful take on the prompt chosen! Very well penned thoughts of depth above and beyond what the image can contain. Excellent write! Thank you so much for your entry & Best wishes in the contest!


  • Dragon Tamer
    December 24, 2007

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    This is so sad, yet so beautiful at the same time. I think you have captured what mankind does best with a lot of things in this world with this particular stanza:
    defenseless beauty
    admired;
    stolen~
    used
    Thank you for sharing some more of your wonderful talent with us and best of luck in the contest
    Don


  • poet2angels gold member
    December 24, 2007

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    Sigh~
    Such emotion and vulnerability in every word of this....
    Beautifully sad and softly embracing the picture..
    Brilliant as always my dearest..

    Lynda


  • Sonja
    December 24, 2007

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    What a great used words and comparison and metaphors dear Jasmine. My best wishes for this contest and for upcoming Holidays.
    ~Sonja~

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