Darling,
Even if there is no music in heaven
Don't stop dancing.
Darling,
Since you broke free
Broke free, from this gravity
I have missed you so
Darling,
I will never
let you go.
Darling,
Promise me
You won't stop dancing
Don't ever stop showing
Your true beauty.
Darling,
Even when the music stops
Keep it going in your head
Don't stop dancing
Or I too may soon be dead.
Darling,
Keep me living
Live and well
Dont stop dancing
Or I'll go to Hell.
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this was lovely. it struck me at the very beginning because my whole life is about music. very very good write. thanks for entering!
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Nicely done!
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You Won a HM
Hey, thanks for entering my contest. I really enjoyed reading your poem. Much love, Katie -
Made me think
Very good read. I liked it a lot. I like how you used the title as well as the quote. Thanks for the entry -
I really like this piece. The struggle between life nd death alwasy wanting to hold on to the precious memories for what it is worth thanks for sharing and goodluck in the contest much love
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YOU ARE GIFTED AND I WILL CONTINUE TO LOOK FOR YOUR POEM
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AS WE WALK THIS GREAT BALL OF DIRT, I LOOK UP AND SCREAM TO THE MANY FREE SOULS, THE MANY I SHARED LIFE WITH, THE MANY WHO GAVE ME LIFE, THE MANY WHO I AM JEALOUS OF AS THEY TASTE THAT FREEDOM, OH HOW MUCH THEY DANCE, WHAT HAPPINESS THEY MUST HAVE JUST KNOWING THAT LIFE ITSELF IS HELL, HOW NBADLY I BURN, BUT I LOVE THE FIRE, MY WINGS SHALL COME IN TIME. BEAUTIFUL POEM.
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