Absolute numbness
From the breath I can't catch-
A sudden frost
From the heated truth:
Truth is a lie
When that truth is in love.
He will always betray,
Will forever bring hail.
Even in the dead cold of winter
It becomes colder still when the truth comes out.
Author notes
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A contest entry
- Baby, It's COLD outside Quicky!!!! by intanglio2ring.
550 points, ended December 23, 2007, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Brrr!
Loved the line: Will forever bring hail.
Very cold one here - thanks for a wonderfully chilled not shaken night!
Tang
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wow, such deep and intense words! I felt this peice. Great job!
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