A roaring fire and a bear-skin rug,
a bottle of our favorite wine.
Aromatic candles wafting soft,
baby, tonight you're mine!
Layers of clothing slowly removed,
our body's heat will surely do.
Tender kisses placed just right;
love's craving, I will pursue.
I'll promise you heat to your very core,
and leave you begging, always for more.
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A contest entry
- Baby, It's COLD outside Quicky!!!! by intanglio2ring.
550 points, ended December 23, 2007, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Oh yummy!! Dayum this is hot and sexy!
Great writing with very stimulating imagery
Congratulations on winning Silver.
It is very deserving.
Jeannie
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DDDid I say it was CCCold outside??
Cause it's certainly (loosen's collar} Hot in here!
Whew!
Lovely write - I forgot about the weather though!
Tang
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Yum
Sounds like a perfect night! Nothing cold about this with that vivid imagery
All the best!
Gaylene
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that write will deffinitely warm the soul if not melt the snow. lol well done xx
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