In THEIR WORLD
They laugh at disaster,
breaking bones of impressionable children.
Savouring the disguise of disgust upon their faces,
too scared to admit molestation.
In THEIR WORLD
Will they pay now?
those fucking priests.
Presenters of god so they say,
how can they pray....
Masturbation a boring task,
so they find a nice young child to fuck up the (...)
In OUR WORLD
I know this is harsh,
imagine the poor victim
alone in their grasp.
Mentors they call priests,
steeling a future of warmth..turning it to memories and
a lifetime of therapy...
In OUR WORLD
No one will talk about it....
Society just leaves them alone,
show the bastards for what they are and
pull them down from their throne....
Author notes
I know this one will probably cause an uproar...and I'm ready for it...so throw it at me...any comment welcome. I don't mean to imply all are the same because I know their not.
Written November 4th, 2003
A contest entry
- Make Me Feel by LostInThought.
250 points, ended December 22, 2003, 25 entries
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wow this was a very strong and meaningful poem. i liked how the perspective changed from their world to our world. i cannot relate but can deeply understand where this came from, everybody has some type of problem to deal with and G-D forbid this happen again! the whole situation was definetely not how it should have been. good expression the profanity was stated poetically and not in just a raged hatred for someone. nicely done! thanks for your comment to my contest poem for wildchild's contest. your words were so thoughtful and i hope you think the same of me!
Forever Yours,
Gertrude -
I'm sorry, but I thought this was a tad.. humourous.. maybe I'm desensitized.. but the
Masturbation a boring task,
so they find a nice young child to fuck up the (...)
lines are funny.. Anyway, good luck! -
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fucking awesum!! thats all i have to say...just fuckin awesum!! if sumbody has a problem with this poem then they dont need to comment on it, cuz this poem is FUCKING AWESUM!! nice job!!
Masturbation a boring task,
so they find a nice young child to fuck up the (...)
- thats my favorite part....great shit! good luck!
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wow!!!!!!
Ohhhh you've really touched on a taboo here.... But i applaude u for your courage to speak out about what has been hidden... well not really hidden its been all through the news etc... but it seems people are blinded by that holy robe... I wonder do they stop and think about the children involved???? Those children have to bear the scar of someone elses pleasure 4 the rest of their life.... And a person whom is in a position of trust & power... We hear about some cases... Wat about all those that r 2 ashamed 2 speak out..... I understand it's not all... n i would love 2 think it is in the minority....
I commend you once again on your courage 2 speak out about this contraversial topic... Also this is so well written... the raw emotion... A Brilliant write... Hoping there isn't 2 many adverse comments... Theres no denying it's not happening...
GREAT WRITE
Best Wishes
~Tracey~
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