what would you do if i cut
if i cried
if i died
because of suicide?
would you care
would you be there
till the end
at my funeral?
if i cut
would you care
would you help me
in my time of need?
if i cried
would you ignore it
or would you be there
when i need you most?
if i died
would you be there till the end
or would you go about your normal day
and forget my existence?
if i committed suicide
would you go to my funeral
would you look at my dead corpse
in the open casket?
what would you do if i cut
if i cried
if i died
because of suicide?
I don't think you'd care
or be there
until the end at my funeral
but would you prove me wrong?
What did you think
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Great work!
Gee! I felt like this when I was 15-actually, on my fifteenth birthday.Life can be terribly brutal for young people.I hope you're not feeling this now.If you ever need an ear, I'll listen.
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WELL DONE
ANOTHER GREAT WRITE, KEEP WRITING!! -
DID YOU READ "MY TIMELINE" ON MY SITE
THIS POEM IS A GREAT EXPRESSION THAT MANY FEEL BUT WON'T SPEAK OF. PEOPLE TURN THEIR BACKS AND SAY IT'S JUST FOR ATTENTION, BUT ISN'T THAT THE POINT, FOR SOMEONE TO PAY "REAL" ATTENTION TO HOW WE FEEL. THE REALITY OF THINGS IS THAT AS WE SUFFER THROUGH MTHE COURSE OF OUR LIFE, WE FIND THAT SO OFTEN EVERYTHING WE SEE RESSEMBLES A BACK TURNED TOWARDS US, SADLY, A MAJORITY OF IT IS IN OUR HOMES, THE VERY ONES THAT BE THE CLOSEST TO US. IF THE ONES THAT TRULY UNDERSTAND HOW IT FEELS TO BE SO EMPTY, BUT FULL OF WANT, WOULD COME FORTH IN OUR LIVES WE WOULD HAVE TRULY CARING FRIENDS, A CARING WORLD, CAUSING A LIFE WORTH WANTING, WORTH LIVING.
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