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sally salamander

sally salamander
stares silently
seeking stocking
super stuffed
Santa surprise
sweet sally
spotted salamander
simple style
salamander stone

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i like the letter s

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  • Scyphon
    November 29, 2008

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    Thats a hard one to read fast, lol
    The S's get me twisted up, haha
    Well done, and congrats on the gold and HM


  • Slick99
    August 19, 2008

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    this is cool. kinda weird, but still good!!! i love the title, and the background fits the poem!!! you should be very proud if yourself, Genna!!! congrats on the gold and honarable mention trophies!!! keep up the good work and have a nice day!!!-slick99


  • paulcreates silver member
    March 23, 2008
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    hmmmm, I would think there would be a rule about redundancy...guess not.
    LOL

    Paul


  • LoneFairrie
    February 25, 2008

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    I count 20 hisses. Every word hissed at me Very well done. I enjoyed your hissy poem about a wonderful salamander.


  • delightfulmess silver member
    December 24, 2007

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    awe.... S is my favorite letter.
    another cute one sweetie.. Hope you have a wonderful xmas..


    Delila


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    December 24, 2007

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    awwwwwwwwwww this is so cute and i love the way you use s the whole way through it. well done and best of luck


  • Dutch Doll
    December 24, 2007

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    Awww. this is really adorable, hun. I tried to get my hubby to say it fast, that was funny, should have seen it, LOL. Good job!

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    December 23, 2007

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    This is very cute and a great write for only using the letter s very creative love you loads


  • Melodies
    December 23, 2007

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    AH HA! The letter S!

    Such silly stuff staring, sparking, slinking... slobbering, sighing, stuffing stockings! Very adorable poem and oh my gosh, a salamander! Cool!


  • SweetNessaLynn
    December 23, 2007

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    haha This is cute. I like it. Best of luck in the contest.
    Love,
    Aunt Nessa

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