Nothingness
Empty space
Vastness
What a waste
Climbing
One by one
Reaching, trying to overcome
Each step a separate war
Look to the top
Nothing to open
No door
*Rdrl*
Author notes
Open that door..... go through!
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt by walkinthereign.
300 points, ended January 1, 2008, 13 entries
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Comments
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Sad
This poem is kinda of sad
That even when there is a bright light just ahead of you, you can't see it.
You said,"Nothing to open No door" Keep searching for the light my friend! There is a door you just have to keep trudging up those stairs and you'll find it. I know life's hard but you will see the light one day just have faith!
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