In a little town
called Bethelehem
A tiny baby was born.
Wise men came from afar
They fell upon their knees
to worship the King.
Author notes
Felt this would make a beautiful Card.
Hope it fits the contest.
A contest entry
- Partners In Crime Group Contest by: BabyChronic0304 ; Seeing Santa by Partners In Crime.
525 points, ended December 31, 2007, 5 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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What a short piece this is.
But beautiful, capturing the story in so fewer words. -
beautiful!
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short, sweet, to the point and beautiful! You're right, this would totally fit on a card...thank you for sharing this, and for taking the time to enter my contest,
Luck. -
Tidy to the point and in few words you make your statement - like punch punch punch.
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This is a pretty cool birth announcement. I like how you kept it short yet says what needs to be said.
Good job and congratulations on the /bronze trophy
Dee
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so short but you said a ton!!!
Very nice, thanks for entering and good luck! -
That is a short but nice little piece you wrote...Good luck in the contest...
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Indeed it is....lovely.
Piff
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Excellent announcement, very rhythmic and also a great thing to hear.
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