You've torn a bloody hole in me,
My heart
My soul
My mind.
Have you trapped me like a butterfly?
Impaled with a pin in your collection.
Pressed until all thoughts have passed,
No breath, no consciousness may last.
You've left me Tainted,
Left me scarred...
I like it.
Author notes
Someone will (or at least should) know what this means, another someone might be able to figure this out...
Dedicated to mi fighter!
Chu.
Anyway, this isn't supposed to flow well, it's supposed to read differently at certain parts...possibly to represent different emotions that may be felt by the speaker.
(Sorry for rambling.)
Hope ya like it!
A contest entry
- What Ever You Want!! by GypsyEyes.
700 points, ended January 21, 2008, 44 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Lalalala
Comments
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well this is very good! i liked the flow and i didn't find it odd at parts...well thank you for entering adn good luck!
~NineTailedFox -
I like this. It is really good. the ireguilar flow made it seams so rough and that workes well for this poem. Great job. Sure to get you a win. talk to you latter sis!
*peace*
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nnniiiiiccceeee. =) i can relate. good job.
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I'm so glad you liked it
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