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The Abyss

Slipping away,
falling into the abyss,
life drained from my soul,
sucked into nowhere.

A contest entry

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  • pappacass
    January 4, 2008
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    i like

    short and to the point...awsome


  • Naridill
    December 26, 2007

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    Intense and crafted with personal emotions. The wording is beautifully done.

    Thanks for entering.
    Much luck.