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[ full house ]

full house
when Queens outnumber
the Kings

A contest entry

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  • Haiku-bless-you gold member
    January 13, 2008

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    What a delightful Card Ku! This is a multilayered poem with several interpretations, some quite bizzare...LOL Well Done my friend

    Dennis


  • AceOSpades
    January 13, 2008

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    This is cute. I really wish I had a better appreciation for Haikus. This one seems like there's quite a few directions you can take it in though... have some applause


  • Swan song gold member
    December 30, 2007

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    Excellent whitty and cute. I like


  • myron silver member
    December 24, 2007

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    winning hand

    this looks like you have played a winning hand.

    i like the fact that the females beat the males in this poker game.

    very creative haiku.

    best wishes in the contest,
    myron.