Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

It's Over

This is going to break my heart
Clear in two
But, my dear, it's something that we
Clearly, must do

I know it's going to hurt
Me, and you, too
But we both know how it's going to end
I don't want to hurt you

But sometimes the light
At the end of the tunnel goes black
And sometimes, just sometimes, you might
Not be able to get that light back

That's what it's like for us now
I can look but I can't touch any longer
And I just can't figure how
We could ever make this any better

So, honey, just stand back
And we'll go our seperate ways to
Try to get our seperate lives back on track
Alone and lonely

Please don't try to make this hard
It's hard enough as it is, baby
And please don't be too sad
It just wasn't meant to be

Maybe some day we'll be friends once more
But for now, honey, we're done
I'll just see you to the door.

Not a poet! ...Quite :D What do you think?

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

  • Erin-Courtney
    October 21
    Edit | Reply

    OMFG

    Tay, you know this poem is 4 me!

  • Evil-Beach
    August 21, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    thats sooooo gud!!!!

  • Babie-CHICANA
    January 5, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    i thought this poem was very good. i can relate to it in many ways. i can tell this comes from the heart and thats awesome.keep up the good work


  • frownsnfreckles
    December 26, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    gosh! I wish I had such strength of conviction. Love the line 'but for now honey, we're done' a very strong line. It flows well, gathers strength and ends brilliantly. well done!