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A Perfect Conception

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The Holy Spirit
creator of DNA
hovered the waters of
the vast universe
breathing life- cells
into Mary's womb
sent an angel...spiraling from heaven
to deliver the Good News
that baby Jesus..... resides within


Christ Jesus....
formed with perfection...
from the very begnning
filled with The Holy Ghost
born in Bethlehem.....as the Savior of the world

And the Word became flesh

from God the Father
to Galilee
to Nazareth
to the house of David
to Joseph
to Mary
  ......................to all Mankind


 A Perfect Conception



The Only reason to celebrate Christmas to me

 

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  • Lady Altheia
    December 6, 2008

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    Wow, an amazing poem and picture. His whole life is a miracle. Congratulations on winning the gold trophy.


    • SilverButterfly gold member
      December 6, 2008
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      thank you Lady! I'm happy youlike the poem.

      have a blessed Christmas this year!!

      SilverButterfly


  • storiesuntold gold member
    December 31, 2007

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    Excellent write indeed

    For in my beliefe each and every child born carries a piece of our lord within and the world truly needs to nourish and teach love to every child born to see this world saved as it was meant to be saved .God Bless


  • LadyShiva
    December 28, 2007

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    Wow that was beautiful, the true meaning of Christmas. Thank you for bringing it back to the light, I fear that it had gotten lost among all of the glitter that Chirstmas has become!! Excellent write!!

    Lauren


  • Marshall013004
    December 26, 2007

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    wow great reason if any to write about Christmas. Thanks for sharing!


  • The Madman silver member
    December 25, 2007
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    Beautifully penned beginning to end. Kudos,

    Evan


  • walkinthereign
    December 25, 2007

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    Merry Christmas Jesus!

    Wow, what a beautiful way to honor Jesus on his birthday! I love the last stanza! Jesus is a gift to all mankind!


    • SilverButterfly gold member
      December 25, 2007
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      thank you sweetie! I do appreciate your kind comment.

      GBY
      SilverButterfly


  • IndividualEleven
    December 24, 2007

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    oh, Tonis not on at the moment, but I'm sure she'll agree so I'm placing this one on the fianlist list for a second review, err it wont let me, AP messed up my name for cojudge, so I'll have to leave her a msg

  • IndividualEleven
    December 24, 2007
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    I like it!!!

    Well done and clear presice message, well paced and very powerful!!!! Including the end, the true meaning of christmas!!!


  • Iris Doyle
    December 24, 2007

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    wow i've never read anything like this ever in my whole life! this is amazing! good luck in the contest and Merry CHRISTmas


  • seamaiden
    December 24, 2007

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    The true meaning of Christmas is not heard very often. The birth of Jesus Christ according to many. This was a very moving piece. Thank you for sharing with me and good luck in the contest. Keep writing poet. seamaiden ♥


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    December 24, 2007

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    wow this is an amazing and beautiful piece which is writtenwith intense and beautiful words. well done and best of luck


    • SilverButterfly gold member
      December 24, 2007
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      thank you sweet poet! I had hoped it touched atleast one.

      GBY
      silverbutterfly


  • PerfectImperfection
    December 24, 2007

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    An amazing piece of potency, touching straight to the heart. A beautiful piece of poignancy in the midst of this chaotic world. Nicely penned!
    Merry Christmas!


    • SilverButterfly gold member
      December 24, 2007
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      Thank you my dear! I'm happy it touched you.

      Have a wonderful Christmas

      GBY
      SilverButterfly


  • stavykm gold member
    December 24, 2007
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    Perfect Poem

    What a beautiful, excellent write of our Lord and Savior. I just loved the flow of your poem. The title is perfect and I love the layout. Lovely to hear the truth written so gracefully. Thank you for sharing your poem with me.
    Blessings
    Kelle Marie
    stavykm


  • tawk gold member
    December 23, 2007

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    Wow I love this!!! It is amazing and so full of God's love. I agree this is the only reason to celebrate Christmas Merry Christmas and good luck in the contest


    • SilverButterfly gold member
      December 23, 2007
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      thank you sweet poet. I love yours too!!! It was awesome

      GBY
      SilverButterfly


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    December 23, 2007

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    This is very beautiful and I really
    enjoyed reading it. Wonderful job
    here and thanks a lot for sharing it
    with us all! All the best to you in
    this contest and keep it up!




    Jeremy0826


    • SilverButterfly gold member
      December 23, 2007
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      Thank you sweet poet!

      have a wonderful Christmas by the way

      GBY
      SilverButterfly


  • Soulful Woman silver member
    December 23, 2007

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    I truly enjoyed this. It was simple but with a definate impact on this reader. Thank you for sharing such special thoughts with us.
    Have a wonderful holiday season with much love and many blessings.
    Soulful Woman


    • SilverButterfly gold member
      December 23, 2007
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      Thank you for the encouraging comment poet.
      You have a most joyous Christmas also!!!!

      GBY
      SilverButterfly


  • Exodus gold member
    December 23, 2007

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    Normally I am not one for religious or christmas poems because they all tend to blend together after a while but there was something about this one I really enjoyed I especially liked the imagery of the one liner between the second and third stanza. Good luck in the contest


    • SilverButterfly gold member
      December 23, 2007
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      thank dear poet for you kindness and commenting on this write!

      GBY
      SilverButterfly


  • DogTagz-TheJalapeno
    December 23, 2007
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    that was so sweet.good job.


  • Talking Toni gold member
    December 23, 2007

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    Wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    I love the form and the style and everything about this. It is filled with such spirituality!!! Thanks for you entry and the best of luck in our contest!!!~~Toni~~


    • SilverButterfly gold member
      December 23, 2007
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      I'm so happy you approved Toni. I wasn't sure this would represent exactly what you wanted. Thank you

  • Virginia Logsdon
    December 23, 2007
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    Beautiful!

    I truely think this is a lovely poem about the conception and birth of Jesus!


    • SilverButterfly gold member
      December 23, 2007
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      thank you very much! I am so grateful for your comment and that you liked this!!!

      GBY

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