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Waiting Moments of Want

Scattered through
the labyrinth of my heart,
where your fingers stroke the core;
lies waiting moments
of stolen time.

Every caress from
unforgotten breezes
whisper subtleties to my soul.

Flutters amalgamate
thunderous beats,
stumbling distant journies.
Enchanted breaths resonate
deep within waiting memories.

The softness of you,
enveloped in strength,
lingers upon misted dreams;
beckoning release.

Your essence,
I hold dear;
but it is you I need.

With fragrant thoughts
drifting slowly,
I melt;
wanting to feel you close.

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  • nothinghere silver member
    February 28

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    Hood Wink!!

    Sigh... I just want to drink in these words or rest in them for a while... just so soft and graceful... you capture the heart with every word... beautiful

    Karen

  • littlejulie
    December 23, 2007
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    Beautiful and magical. This is such a romantic poem, touching and moving. Liked it very much.