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Phsycotic Christmas

Today is Chrismas eve
And I am bored
I go out into the street

Snow falls
Bells ring
And Children laugh

I look around
Picking out
My newest victim

My murders have been
All over the news
I'm famous me

My eyes dart round
And rest on you
Alone and walking home

I reach out
Touching your arm
With my silver dagger

Cutting, slashing
Down at you
Painting the snow crimson

Happy christmas
To your Family
Hope they like the present

I leave you
Upon the nearest step
Until you are found

What a lovely
Suprise I've left
I'm sure the occupents will love it

Author notes

Opition 1: a cross between Murder on Christmas and receiving something dead as a present.

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  • Danneh
    December 23, 2007

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    Mhmm, good job with this piece... It's not very descriptive, but makes the cut.
    Good luck in the contest.

    -Danneh<3