Luring seduction
Undenied attraction
Sexual tension
Thoughts overwhelming
Author notes
You know it!
Written November 3rd, 2003
In a list
A contest entry
- Short and Sweet (or not so sweet) by LadyStarlight.
250 points, ended November 8, 2003, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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The author note is a interesting as the acrostic, just because there seems to be a lot of emotion behind it. I myself don't normally do acrostics -- once in a while, and usually some element of sarcasm involved (one I wrote called "The Teletubbies" is particularly representative of that). I liked this simple acrostic, however - particularly "luring seduction."
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Very Creative
Hee Hee Hee... that was perfect description....I love acrostics....yours was well done
God Bless, Sunshine
P.S.Thanks for your comments -
Lust all the way! Lately I've been wondering whether or not lust is a good thing...I'm still not sure...but I think that as long the one in control of seducing those poor little souls...it's all good...
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Awesome
Love the background Ms. Creative
~Awesome poem and I see this is a contest poem so of course best wishes to you~ Great topic too 
~ One of my favorites 
~ More please~Remember I am in AA~Acrostics Anonymous ~ Big hugs 
and much love~Desire
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Thanx! I actually made this background meself
Glad ya liked!
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wow it is short but sweet lol, I love the background, I guess you have to become a preferred memeber for it, sigh, I can't yet, but I'm dying to become one lol, great job here.
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Short and to the point. You said so much here in so few words. Nicely done.
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Hot poem- a perfect depiction! This is how an acrostic should be done. Good luck in the contest!
~Sam
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Perfect description! This definitely made me stop and think. I love the little vertical thingy, I forget what thats called. Anywho, good luck with the contest. Later!
<3,
Alison -
Thanks for entering with this, a great example of so much being said in a few words.. and what words and what an image you paint Great entry,
Blessings and Smiles
~LadyStarlight~ -
Ha Ha Thanx for rootin for "LUST" haha...it can be fun...but it is quite dangerous as well I've gotten myself into some dumb situations due to lustful feelings...oh well...I had fun
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WOW! Now, this is LUST. You said it all and then some. Good luck with the contest!
Renee
Edited on Nov 05, 3:33 p.m. because ''.
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lust is such a great thing, but also such a bad thing. depends on how u look at it
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Whoa, girl, you said a mouth full. Good stuff.
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Woot woot!! i root for this one to place lol. I'm a lust fan, can you tell? haha great job!
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groovy, I like!
your words describe it perfectly.
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