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Bells

Bells

stop to ponder
when you hear the bells
don’t let your mind wonder
the story it tells, as it rings clear
hear the bells sound, piercing the air
stories profound and some quite austere
some ringing bells call and some set a pace
some toll to enthrall and some ring to embrace
there are bells with such class made out of brass
those brass bells on ships are for long ocean trips
there are some bells that chime an’ ring out the time
the church bells it’s said, sound when lovers are wed
bright silver bells ringing when the choir starts singing
there are bells made of gold from the kingdom of old

the bronze bells are made while some come from jade

the bells that chime out, in the dark of the night, piercing

our minds much to our delight. yet not all the bells that toll
out their sound, spread a cheer to those, gathered around. hearing
the bell that will steal your breath is the keening bell sound, announcing
a death.

 

 


 

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  • second-born
    January 3

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    wow...you never cease to amaze me with your outstanding poetry...and this one certainly blew me away...a perfect flow with a perfect shape of a bell...truly you're a poet who is dedicated to her craft...


  • Ellis gold member
    December 27, 2007

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    REMARKABLE -- Outstanding

    When I saw this, I marveled at the accuracy of the shape, but started not to read it, because shape poetry ordinarily doesn't appeal to me, it is how a poem sounds and what it says. But this is by Amera, so I read it. It would be a terrific poem if it was not a bell (as I suspected)! The bell shape is perfect, of course, being Amera (a remarkable feat to be that perfect). How VERY clever to incorporate the SKIPPED LINES the way she did, at the top and near the bottom for bell decoration! (Remarkable!) What talent and ability. It worked so well. If it hadn't, I know she would not have used it, but she made it work.
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  • amid unnaked things
    December 24, 2007

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    Beautiful! I have to say what I liked the best about this poem is the way you got it into a bell shape. I would never have the patience to round out the edges to make this. Hope you do well in the contest!

    Always,
    Cassie


  • Desire gold member
    December 24, 2007

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    Oh My Word!!

    Wow!!!!

    This is one Magnificent Powerful piece You have penned and shape poetry is hard...but You made it look soooooo easy
    Love this!!~~

    Gorgeous presentation!!!


    Thank You for sharing Your Talent!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • Dalaney gold member
    December 23, 2007
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    sigh. this is amazing.
    how do you DO this??

    Lane


  • Faeryn
    December 23, 2007
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    very nice! a wonderful poem and a shape to go with it!
    ~Tay


  • L.a.
    December 23, 2007

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    Very well done. You have made a lasting impression, a memory for me to reflect to my days ends.
    L.ove A.lways


  • PerVirtuous gold member
    December 23, 2007

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    Another example of poetic genius. I love it! Keep up the great work. We must think alike, for I did a Christmas shape poem, too! Although for some reason I expect Hallmark will be more interested in yours...


  • BellaD
    December 23, 2007
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    Beautiful poem!

    A wonderful piece. Rich language. Well done, Amera.


  • JohnnyD gold member
    December 23, 2007

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    Ahh, me cubbie, very nicely done, love the shape, reminds me of the prayer bells at the Monastery in Nepal I had to spin several times a day except they were more cylindrical, and trust me, in the winter you did not wish to put your tongue on one either!

    LOL!



    dad


  • Whoochi gold member
    December 23, 2007

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    OHHHH Excellent, this rings true..and just flowed like honey off my mouth..The form is splendid (like you!) and the flow was sooo right on, but then again you are the form queen... Hey I love you & miss you tons..hope all is well with you! Have a very Merry Xmas and an even bettr New Year! Beautiful piece DOLLFACE...

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