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Driven To Complete

Given my life once more to complete
The Lord's Holy Spirit living within
The sun never sets on the dismay of the times
He has gifted me life no matter if it rhymes
Showed me a way to help fellow man
Give two legs for the firmness I stand
This is my drive with Him at the wheel




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Love Bruce Lee and his accomplishments and theory!
But my drive comes from a higher source!

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  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    January 4, 2008

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    Oh woe is faithless me to even come close to understanding how wonderful this higher source is to you... you capture it brilliantly hun

    Karen


    • Quiet places
      January 5, 2008
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      Faith is knowing He is there wanting you to call on Him for the gift of life and the salvation given to you by the blood of His Son! Such a wonderful feeling! Thank you for the reading and compliments on this poem my dear!


  • Desire gold member
    December 27, 2007

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: Driven To Complete
    Wonderful piece You have versed and Powerful energy brought forth

    These lines grabbed and tugged:
    Give two legs for the firmness I stand
    This is my drive with Him at the wheel

    He has gifted me life no matter if it ryhmns
    ...ryhmns
    for this word...I thought You might have meant
    rhymes..but I digested the energy to *feel*
    Your words...

    Thank You for sharing Your Spirit and voice!

    Best wishes to You in the contest
    **Judging will be done shortly
    Many blessings to You Sweet Soul
    and much love~ Desire~*~

    • Quiet places
      January 5, 2008
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      Thanks for the tip hun! Fixed it! Also thank you for the wonderful comment and compliments! Happy you liked it, Don


  • raggyann
    December 25, 2007
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    this was awsome
    i loved the message
    you gave out in this poem


    • Quiet places
      January 5, 2008
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      Thrilled that you liked this one my dear!! Thank you for the compliments, Don


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    December 23, 2007
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    gratitude with a lot of heart beautiful God bless


    • Quiet places
      December 23, 2007
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      Thank you for the comment and the compliment my friend!! Don


  • dustookie2
    December 23, 2007

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    Just a beautiful reflection of your heart and soul shining through these lines my friend. So much has been said in just a few words the power of there meaning not lost. The driving force of many me thinks. Good luck in the contest.


    • Quiet places
      December 23, 2007
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      Thank you my dear friend for such a wonderful comment and compliments!! So happy you liked my poem!! Don

  • imahealer
    December 23, 2007

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    When we are blessed by a higher entity, and look around at those who have no legs to walk, have no hearing , but can hear, are blind, but can see,there is no greater driving force, than the One of whom you write!
    Wonderful entry to this contest! Am new to this site, and saw your comments, so decided to walk my fingers to you, voila! A wonderful soul and poet! Best wishes in this contest. Have a Blessed Holiday!

    Shana

    • Quiet places
      December 23, 2007
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      Thank you very much for such a wonderful comment and compliments on my poem and comments! Pleased to have you aboard! Must read your poems too! Don!

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