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Love

What is love?
A simple smile,
A simple kiss,
A single look
That made all the difference?

Love is eternal happiness.
It's the feeling of heavenly bliss.
It's what keeps people move on,
With their otherwise hopeless lives.

What happens when you have a broken heart?
What happens when you have gone through your life
Without a simple sense of Love?
Is life really worth living?

What Happens when you wake up
And Love disappears?
What happens when you stop searching?
Does life become a waste?

When you've gone upon that path,
Is there turning back?
Once you've stopped believing,
Can you believe again?

Do you believe in Love?

Author notes

**sighs** I started trying to say what love is, but then my emotions took over, hence the muse makes another appearance.... COMMENT!

as for the contest...my prompt is obviously What is love?

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Comments


  • Gypsie Ink
    June 20, 2008

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    Nice!

    and if we figured out the answers we still wouldn't be asking these questions. An emotional piece. Thank you for entering and Best of Luck!


  • K-GyaL
    June 11, 2008

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    I like it.
    It caught my attentions and kept me wanting for more.
    Great Job!
    Good Luck!


  • Demmy-Defect
    December 29, 2007

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    eh, i believe i love this poem (*cough --ignore the pun ) but seriously! you have a sweet rythm and everything! an awsome write