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The Rain

Yume to nura reru sora
Skies painted with dreams

Kibou no itamus saikou no kumo
Clouds of hope sore high

Jikan no chiryou ame
The healing rain of time

Kutsuu de sosogu koto
Pouring down on the pain

Chikyuu no hason noyouni
Like the tears of earth

Watashi niyotteha watashi ga inoru inoru
I pray I pray

Kibou no hikari no taiyou notame
For the sun, for rays of hope

Watashitachi ni souji surutame
To sweep over us

Sou ame wa suitai surukamoshirenai
So the rain may fade

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  • Candy6
    December 27, 2007
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    awesome

    Japan language is beautiful, too.


  • Stevie17Marie
    December 27, 2007

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    this is cool
    i love it!!!!!!!
    i would give you 3 applauses but i ran out sowwie but this was excellent very interesting
    keep up the good work

    stevie


    • Jrokku No Hime
      December 27, 2007
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      Thank you very much. I am glad you enjoyed it. I never know how people will take my translated poems.


  • Violet Hawthorne
    December 25, 2007

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    that is Japanese I presume? I like poems in other languages. Its beautiful in both, and thanks for translating it

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