I succumb.
My sweetheart
its been a long day,
I missed you a lot.
Please hold me
massage away my tensions,
your hands relieving
and familiar.
Melt me with the softest
of kisses,
a burning trail left on my skin.
I succumb
stimulated
and pining our love
to come together as one,
reach new destinations
here in our bed.
Sculpt me to your nakedness
hold my wanting
body tightly and
let loving hands wander.
My treasures come to life for you
Thirsty,
fanatical
for your touch.
Give into me,
Speak of your desires
I will give forth
your fantasy baby.
Bring reality
to wildest of dreams.
Tonight I am more
then your lover.
Author notes
prayers
This is a revision of the origanal. more has been added in in the hope thaat i have grown it into more
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Once again very sensual and quite classy if you ask me....shows the love and wonderful feelings held for that special someone....wanting to give all of yourself to that person......love it Cindi..
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I do love to want to give all myself to him
Cin -
Thanks poppa but this is the completed piece, so thats make sme think I havent done well on my improvements lol
But thank you for reading
Cindy
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I'm just letting you that I've read your piece [I found it to be short...maybe if you lengthen it a bit.....] and that I'll read it again before the close.
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NOOO!!!! I want MORE!! Why did you have to end this? Well, what is there is mind blowing!! I love it!!
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lol, im sorry.
I am thinking I might take this back to the editing room and see how much more I grow it. If I do I will let you know
CIndy
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Very passionate and sensual with some
wonderful imagery here. Great work
with this one!
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Thank you
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A deeply sensual piece of poetry... very passionate
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Thanks friend, was something that just came out at the time hehehe
Cin
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wow this was erotic and sweet i like it!!! good luck
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Thank you cupcake
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