she is a higher spirit
in the curve of endless
i lie breathless
with her flower
and suckle the dew
of divine
with this poet's lips
Author notes
as the saying goes, behind every good man...
for D
In a list
A contest entry
- - What Drives You? - by Desire.
700 points, ended December 27, 2007, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: spirit
Wonderful piece You have versed and Powerful images brought forth
These lines grabbed and Spirit:
and suckle the dew
of divine
with this poet's lips
Thank You for sharing Your Spirit and voice!
Best wishes to You in the contest
**Judging will be done shortly
Many blessings to You Sweet Soul
and much love~ Desire~*~
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I truly hope my husband of 34 years feels this "spirit" in me. He is the other half of mine and I am most grateful to have him as I see you are her. Beautiful!
A Joyous Holiday to You & Yours Richard! ♥
† Alaways †
Renee 
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I think you're both lucky...& even better, you both know it, too. Gorgeous penning, Scribe. Good luck in the contest, Sweetie. Happy Holidays to you & yours, my dear Friend. 
Wanderer
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Beautiful.
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This is just gorgeous! Simple, yet not really. You know i love that
One hell of a lucky woman to have something so exquisite penned for her. This is perfection. Blessings, Gypsy
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Absolutely STUNNING!! So full of passion, love, and reverence. Lucky woman!! Beautifully penned, as always dear man. I have missed your work, and just had to sit here long enough to read you again. How well worth it it was!! Happy Holidays, dear friend. May you and yours be blessed with all the love, laughter, light, and happiness you can stand....now and for the New Year to come.
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Lucky D.
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