One finger
One button
One push
Nuclear destruction
No life
Lone planet
One universe
Author notes
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A contest entry
- - What Drives You? - by Desire.
700 points, ended December 27, 2007, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Longing to read BREVITY by Lavender Butterfly.
390 points, ended March 18, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very detailed and vividly intense... x
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LB
As alaways, thank you for the kind comments
Much love
Many blessings
David
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Simply stunning hun, so easy to see why you won gold with this piece, the power of one finger huh.... congrats
Karen
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: One
Wonderful piece You have penned and Powerful images You have brought forth
These lines grabbed and tugged:
One push
Nuclear destruction
No life
Thank You for sharing Your voice!
Best wishes to You in the contest
**Judging will be done shortly
Many blessings to You Sweet Soul
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Desire,
As always, thank you for the sweet comments.
This was different write for me. I wrote what I saw, which was a few words that I hope sends a strong message.
Kinda scary but true as well!
Wonderful prompt.
Many blessings
Have a safe and Happy New Year!
David
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Very thought provoking
… all it would take is one small moment of madness to make it happen and we would disappear into oblivion. I believe in a scientific explanation for mankind being on this Earth and I’ve often wondered if we were to completely obliterate ourselves and the planet recovered from the mess we left behind, if we would ever evolve into the same species we are now. Good luck in the contest.
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My Angel ♥
You are amazing. You took a powerful picture and blew it up larger than life !
Kinda scary though ... makes me think of the movie 'The Day After Tomorrow'
Best of luck in the contest baby
Stay safe
I love you, always
Your wife, Manda
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Ahh yes such a powerful piece in so few lines. Excellent! All the best with this
gaylene
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How very powerfully written!
Geez!
So much said in so very few words!
All the best to you in this contest! -
I love this! excellent take on the prompt, best to you in the contest ~blessings always~ Trisha
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i just told Amanda i cant leave a proper comment, coz I'm gobsmacked!
powerful message David!
well done and good luck
♥ Dani
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