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One!

Missing image

One finger

One button

One push

Nuclear destruction

No life

Lone planet

One universe

 

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    March 18, 2008
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    Very detailed and vividly intense... x


    • Poetic-Theorem silver member
      March 18, 2008
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      LB
      As alaways, thank you for the kind comments
      Much love
      Many blessings

      David


  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    January 4, 2008

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    Simply stunning hun, so easy to see why you won gold with this piece, the power of one finger huh.... congrats

    Karen


  • Desire gold member
    December 27, 2007

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: One
    Wonderful piece You have penned and Powerful images You have brought forth

    These lines grabbed and tugged:
    One push
    Nuclear destruction
    No life

    Thank You for sharing Your voice!

    Best wishes to You in the contest
    **Judging will be done shortly
    Many blessings to You Sweet Soul
    and much love~ Desire~*~


    • Poetic-Theorem silver member
      December 28, 2007
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      Desire,
      As always, thank you for the sweet comments.
      This was different write for me. I wrote what I saw, which was a few words that I hope sends a strong message.
      Kinda scary but true as well!
      Wonderful prompt.
      Many blessings
      Have a safe and Happy New Year!

      David


  • Lily of the Valley
    December 24, 2007

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    Very thought provoking

    … all it would take is one small moment of madness to make it happen and we would disappear into oblivion. I believe in a scientific explanation for mankind being on this Earth and I’ve often wondered if we were to completely obliterate ourselves and the planet recovered from the mess we left behind, if we would ever evolve into the same species we are now. Good luck in the contest.


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    December 24, 2007

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    My Angel

    You are amazing. You took a powerful picture and blew it up larger than life !

    Kinda scary though ... makes me think of the movie 'The Day After Tomorrow'

    Best of luck in the contest baby
    Stay safe
    I love you, always
    Your wife, Manda


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    December 24, 2007

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    Ahh yes such a powerful piece in so few lines. Excellent! All the best with this
    gaylene


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    December 23, 2007

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    How very powerfully written!
    Geez!
    So much said in so very few words!
    All the best to you in this contest!


  • Arizona Sunset
    December 23, 2007
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    I love this! excellent take on the prompt, best to you in the contest ~blessings always~ Trisha


  • Andi.
    December 23, 2007

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    i just told Amanda i cant leave a proper comment, coz I'm gobsmacked!
    powerful message David!
    well done and good luck
    ♥ Dani

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