Everything she has should be mine
Never have I been so intrigued or
Viscious at the same exact time.
Ignorant of blessings that I bear,
Oblivious to the upsets she faces,
Unable to realize her pain and fears, I'm
Stricken by her life and friends.
Author notes
First acrostic. I hope it's alright. I just decided to be creative and try something new.
A contest entry
- Color Inspired #1 by Solo Wisp.
925 points, ended December 23, 2007, 10 entries
Honorable mention
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Please tell me what you think.
Comments
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I like this acrostic. I think all of us have been envious of someone at one time or another. Ireally enjoyed the read! Thank you for entering my contest.
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Your acrostic is fine.
It seems to show a grand stage of envy, breaching a possessive behavior.
Unique and Creative.
Thanks for your entry and best of luck in the contest!
-Min-
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