the kigo is grey
stone is the night's metaphor
-peering into fog
Author notes
After the heaviest snows for a December in 40 years in our area; we are about to embark on a bout of rain, sleet and freezing fog!
In a list
A contest entry
- TAKE A WALK HAIKU CONTEST by Swan song.
480 points, ended December 24, 2007, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Hopefully the weather will get better. Nice work on this one! I was impressed!
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thanx,Pat!
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this is great. good luck with the weather there - here it is sunny and hot, cicadas shrilling.
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You illustrate the dilemma, "Echidna", of chosing a "Kigo", a seasonal theme word, on the world-wide-web. AP is a portal to night, day, the four seasons and the national observances on six continents and a multitude of islands and cities every day and all at once: mind-expanding to think about it!...happily, I think a chilly foggy night is within everybody's experiance, though, even "DownUnder"!
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This has caught my eye I have repeated it several times. Don't know what to make out of it. Don't take that in a bad way. Do not comment I want to ponder it
This is very good
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