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When I First Met Him Some Time Ago

When I first met him some time ago
he looked like the kind of guy
I'd like to know

Those sexy eyes
that sexy smile
the way he moved
drove me wild

What would I do?
what would I say?
if he ever came my way?

Would I be happy?
Or would I be sad?
Perhaps, the greatest love I'd have

Then one day it happened
he came to me and said
my wife and I no longer love
I want you instead

To love and hold night after night
for when I saw you
it was love at first sight

Come with me now
I promise this
a lifetime of eternal bliss

A contest entry

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  • alaskanamber
    February 14, 2008

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    It's got to be hard being the mistress. I've met many a man that has said if I only met you before I married her.... That's really the last thing I want to hear. thanks for giving us this perspective on cheaters. Good luck in my contest.


  • WillAlwaysLove silver member
    December 23, 2007

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    Love, what a beautiful thing. Your choice of words are lovely. I really liked this poem, you are a great writer sis. Great penn and nice flow.