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my heart

my heart flows with joy to think of my littel baby
to think of what could have been
there would have been a baby to raise and love
but now there is no baby on the way
how could this happen you ask
well the stress and pain got to me
the screaming and yelling got worse and poof no more baby

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  • ShadowSoul
    December 22, 2007

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    Sad, very very sad, it happens tho, and it's still sad... Very emotional poem, then the last few words made it a lil humourous, kinda took the harsh effect of it away