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Prime

Pink
Juicy
Tempting me
You bring yearning
Teasing my senses
Wanting you on my tongue
Wishing to taste your flavor
To just give in to your urging
Allow you to stimulate my mouth
Oh! To partake of your succulence

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It's how I like my prime rib people!

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  • quantumsurveyor
    December 23, 2007

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    A prime cut indeed. Strangely I find this not erotic at all - perhaps this was meant, I admire the form which must have a name - have been known to produce "diamantes" myself. Nice one.


    • Michael A. de Melo
      December 23, 2007
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      I didn't write it to be erotic, and yet on the site I am transferring from, they made me post it under explicit. As for the form, it is called an Etheree, and I think it is good for putting together a poem that would just lose it's meaning with too many words. I shall have to look up diamantes and try them as well. Happy Holidays!