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Moments

I smoke
You watch
Clouds of toxicity

I ramble
You watch
Reams of idiocity

I stress
You watch
Times of intensity

I laugh
You watch
Breaths of hilarity

You twitch
I notice
I capture
Each moment
I wish
I didn't

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  • Mizzundaztood gold member
    January 3, 2008

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    Wow... The last part really grabbed at me. I love it!It was simpley put, and not dragged out! Great job!!!