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High up on a Balcony...

I'm falling,

          falling,
                   
                    falling...

The crowd  parts.

                I lay there.

While they're still laughing, jolly, merry.

A contest entry

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  • maralisa silver member
    January 10, 2008
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    straight to the point


  • Naridill
    December 26, 2007

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    Very repetitive but effective. Nicely crafted from the prompt.

    Thanks for entering.
    Much luck.


  • quack silver member
    December 22, 2007
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    this is really good
    love rhianna


  • Danneh
    December 22, 2007

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    Wow.. A very twisted view on DiD's prompt.. Beautiful though.. Good luck in the contest.

    -Danneh<3