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Into Lord's Love

From my pain
And cruelties brush
In Lord’s love I’ll fall

A contest entry

Any lines your hated.. maybe liked??

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  • Naridill
    December 26, 2007

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    Well - different for me but not believable. But the direction was new and interesting.

    Thanks for entering.
    Much luck.


  • Shirley Shaw
    December 22, 2007

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    Magnifico

    Short, Sweet, and Wonderful.....Loved It!! 'God Bless You'....Good Luck In The Contest...Love, Shirley shaw, from Raytown,mo.....