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My Dream

In a dream I slowly fall
upon a cloud I easily land.

A contest entry

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  • Naridill
    December 26, 2007

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    Very simple and strong. The imagery is beautifully worded. Nicely penned from prompt.

    Thanks for entering.
    Much luck.